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Under Review#1PostSubject: Vohx's wrath   Vohx's wrath EmptyWed May 10, 2017 8:07 pm

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Name: Immortal demolisher mk.1 "Vohx's wrath"
Owner: The immortals, P.I.F branch.
Manufacturer: The Bylian arms company + Cykx Weaponry masters.


Development Thread: Soon perhaps, we'll see. 

Materials: Cykx plexiglass coated dwarven steel.
Length: 80 meters high.
Rarity: Rare.

Grades
Grade the aspects of the ship below between 1-10. 1 being severely lacking in that aspect, 10 being specialized. Keep things balanced.
Weapons: 1
Armour: 8
Shields: 7
Speed: 1
Maneuvers: 1

Notable Equipment
-Giant built in minigun.
-Titanic strength, The demolisher is made to scrap large enemy ships and thus heavily relies on it's robotic strength, size and meelee damage to complete it's task.

Description
So many ships facing eachother by shooting at eachother...The immortals have always searched for more efficient ways to fight the enemy. But they have always been struggling with the brain to tech connection...Recently the immortals got a new ally, one that could help them in their future endeavours by combining their tech levels into something new, the space combat demolishers were such a thing. Being little more than giant robots designed to land on enemy ships, and run rampant. Utilizing high tech magnet legs these things were designed to cling into and enemy ship and quite litterally tear it apart. They are a rare but brutally efficient if simple means of destroying hostile ships but due to their tremendously slow production rate, their control difficulty and storage space requirement they are a very rare threat.

There are several marks of demolishers, the Vohx's wrath is used strictly by the immortal Cykx offensive branch in space combat. The Vohx's wrath does not have feet and relies on it's magnets to stand up straight making it unusable on planets and usable strictly on enemy ships. Currently there are only 2 in existance and with this production rate it will take a long time before they become actually common.

The Demolishers are foldable and are shot at a ship at a high speed under the cover of many fighter ships until it reaches the enemy, there it will activate the magnets to attach itself to the ship and transform into robot mode. Once it's standing up it will begin using the massive gatling gun on it's back to deal with enemy fighter (it still needs plenty of cover though due to it's size) and use it's arms and anything it can fight to smack with to destroy external defenses, attack control panels and destroy thrusters to prevent an escape and ensure the annihalation of a ship. After the ship was been wrecked the robot will go back into ship mode where it is most vulnerable (but not instantly destructable) and retreats back to it's original mother ship.
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Under Review#2PostSubject: Re: Vohx's wrath   Vohx's wrath EmptyThu May 11, 2017 1:51 am

There are a few things wrong. With the weapons being so low and the only listed weapon is a gattling gun, it cannot take out large ships , at all. The most it can do is shoot smaller fighters.

1. Remove how it can take out large ships, based off numbers it can only take out smaller fighters 

2. Robotic strength makes no sense as the hands cannot break through heavily fortified metal thats meant to resist small meteor showers in space amd resist heavy cruiser fire. The grip as of now, can only take out small fighters

3. Cykx now isn't a faction as its been archived. Thus, it has no company and considered "not-faction".
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Under Review#3PostSubject: Re: Vohx's wrath   Vohx's wrath EmptyThu May 11, 2017 9:34 am

The Cykx became a subsediary to the immortals, if it helps i will make a company app for it as soon as i can. I shall add a point to the weapons to justify it's gatling gun or remove it all together to make it more balanced. But i kind of wanted this to be a vehicle ship kind of (not sure what to classify it as, probaply "space mecha") designed to disrupt an enemy ship and attack it's external defense, not to attack fighter ships as it is focused on meelee. I can explain it a bit better in the app itself, make a dev thread if that helps or give it a few weapons to help in scrapping the enemy ship.

Again, i kind of wanted this to be a weapon designed to attack and damage enemy carriers in close range. So tell me how i can solve it and also keep it's original purpose. Also, it would indeed not make sense for it to grab through the hull of the ship but it was supposed to go for weaker spots on the ship.
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Under Review#4PostSubject: Re: Vohx's wrath   Vohx's wrath EmptyThu May 11, 2017 1:16 pm

Something this small and low stats cannot be a ship or space ship killer, only a fighter killer.
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Under Review#5PostSubject: Re: Vohx's wrath   Vohx's wrath EmptyThu May 11, 2017 1:20 pm

So just increase the size and put extra points in weapons to justify the power of the meelee?
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Under Review#6PostSubject: Re: Vohx's wrath   Vohx's wrath EmptyThu May 11, 2017 1:31 pm

The only way a unit can do damage to large ships. 500+ meters, if you're a frigate or a bomber. Mechs are singular in purpose.
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Under Review#7PostSubject: Re: Vohx's wrath   Vohx's wrath EmptyThu May 11, 2017 1:56 pm

alright, you can go ahead and archive this, we'll copy it and make it a land vehicle later.
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